Under normal circumstances, we probably would have started by asking for revisions. For example, we normally want a more robust and descriptive personality section. Additionally, when we ask that one sample be from our Test Drive, we mean our most recent one, not the very first.

Unfortunately, since this app round put us at our player cap, anything that required revisions got cut.

We encourage you to keep at it by trying different TDMs and getting a good feel for the DWRP community. Maybe even find some friends to proofread your application on the future, or check out some of the other accepted applications for examples of what we (and many other games) look for! If you're still interested next time we're able to open new player applications, you're welcome to try again.