The moderator team finds your application and samples for Fran to largely be excellent. We do have one request, however, and that is the following with regards to her personality section:
Please expand just a little bit on Fran's decision to leave the forest and the conflict that she feels regarding the notion of leaving home and family behind. This conflict is a very big part of her person and really drives the gravity of the choice that she's had to make. It also impacts who and how she is being apart from her people and where her place is in the world as a result.
You don't need to rewrite your entire app. This is just a request for additional personality information. Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (April 2023) to resubmit.
REVISIONS REQUESTED
Please expand just a little bit on Fran's decision to leave the forest and the conflict that she feels regarding the notion of leaving home and family behind. This conflict is a very big part of her person and really drives the gravity of the choice that she's had to make. It also impacts who and how she is being apart from her people and where her place is in the world as a result.
You don't need to rewrite your entire app. This is just a request for additional personality information. Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (April 2023) to resubmit.