The moderator team has found content in your application that either was absent, inaccurate, or did not meet our standards. We believe, however, this can be revised and would like to direct your attention to the following:
We would like to see the personality section expanded to show what it is like to interact with Emet-Selch as an individual. Whilst the broad strokes of his motivations are correct, we feel that his application could benefit from a few canon examples of his behaviour when engaging with others.
Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (early March 2023) to resubmit.
REVISIONS REQUESTED
We would like to see the personality section expanded to show what it is like to interact with Emet-Selch as an individual. Whilst the broad strokes of his motivations are correct, we feel that his application could benefit from a few canon examples of his behaviour when engaging with others.
Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (early March 2023) to resubmit.