The moderator team has found content in your application that either was absent, inaccurate, or did not meet our standards. We believe, however, this can be revised and would like to direct your attention to the following:
The personality section is a bit disjointed and difficult to read / understand. We would like to see it fleshed out more regarding Stede's motivations and canon examples of these traits in action, along with more on his relationships with the rest of the cast and how these relationships affect him as a person and as an up and budding gentleman pirate.
Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (early March 2023) to resubmit.
REVISIONS REQUESTED
The personality section is a bit disjointed and difficult to read / understand. We would like to see it fleshed out more regarding Stede's motivations and canon examples of these traits in action, along with more on his relationships with the rest of the cast and how these relationships affect him as a person and as an up and budding gentleman pirate.
Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (early March 2023) to resubmit.