The moderator team has found content in your application that either was absent, inaccurate, or did not meet our standards. We believe, however, this can be revised and would like to direct your attention to the following:
We would like to ask that you personality section be revised slightly to show examples and flesh out some of her traits. ie: when in canon did she react in x, y, or z manner? An example of a personality section like that would be here, or if you'd like to keep it to a bullet point style this was another accepted app. No need to write a novel or anything; just some examples and a little bit of fleshing out will do.
Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (December 2023) to resubmit.
REVISIONS REQUESTED
We would like to ask that you personality section be revised slightly to show examples and flesh out some of her traits. ie: when in canon did she react in x, y, or z manner? An example of a personality section like that would be here, or if you'd like to keep it to a bullet point style this was another accepted app. No need to write a novel or anything; just some examples and a little bit of fleshing out will do.
Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (December 2023) to resubmit.