Thank you for your interest in Expiation! Before we're able to fully review your app, the mod team has some areas where we would like for you to add more detail or information. we believe this can be revised and would like to request the following:
The mod team finds that the personality section reads too much like a history section. We would like you to elaborate more on who he is and how the events you described shaped his personality, both in good and bad. We would also like to see examples of how he reacts to people around him and how he interacts with others. Here is one example app. We recommend you to look around the application post for more examples. Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (December 2024) to resubmit.
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The mod team finds that the personality section reads too much like a history section. We would like you to elaborate more on who he is and how the events you described shaped his personality, both in good and bad. We would also like to see examples of how he reacts to people around him and how he interacts with others. Here is one example app. We recommend you to look around the application post for more examples. Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (December 2024) to resubmit.