The moderator team has found content in your application that either was absent, inaccurate, or did not meet our standards. We believe, however, this can be revised and would like to direct your attention to the following:
- We would like for you to elaborate more on the character's Rift ability. What is it, how does it work, etc.
- We would also like some elaboration on their personality. You describe some of how they are, but we would like to know more about why, as well as how they feel about certain elements of their personality (ie how do they feel about lacking a stable identity, and how does this make them view others around them who do have one). Some example questions to get you going include: how do they choose who they kill and why? If they lack emotions, what keeps them attached to a situation, place, or plotline? What gets them involved? What drives their obsessiveness (interest? hatred? fixation? etc)?
Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (February 2024) to resubmit.
REVISIONS REQUESTED
- We would like for you to elaborate more on the character's Rift ability. What is it, how does it work, etc.
- We would also like some elaboration on their personality. You describe some of how they are, but we would like to know more about why, as well as how they feel about certain elements of their personality (ie how do they feel about lacking a stable identity, and how does this make them view others around them who do have one). Some example questions to get you going include: how do they choose who they kill and why? If they lack emotions, what keeps them attached to a situation, place, or plotline? What gets them involved? What drives their obsessiveness (interest? hatred? fixation? etc)?
Please note that you have 3 days to submit your revisions. If you miss this timeline, you will have to wait until the next application cycle (February 2024) to resubmit.